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Shakespeare's Girls by ~HeartsmACkIngBOOMboX:iconHeartsmACkIngBOOMboX:

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A little project I'm working on in my spare time. Its some of my favorite gals from Shakespeare's work. Anyway, I'd love some critiques before I progress.... except for Ariel. I'm pretty much done with her coloring, so I'd rather not make any changes right now. Feel free to butcher the other three, though!

EDIT: My computer lost all of my work, so I'm afraid this won't ever be finished.

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~Xandi5anders Feb 16, 2008, 10:05:20 AM
Who are all of your favorite gals?

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Oh my Jareth!
"Listen close to everybody's heart and hear that breaking sound"
"Jellybean you can never comprehend the intellect of her mind"
"I can't on my own change [the world], but I can start with me."
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~HeartsmACkIngBOOMboX Feb 16, 2008, 10:11:33 AM
Left to right:
Viola, Helena, Ariel, and Beatrice. I would have thrown Audrey in there, but I just BARELY drew her anyway, so it really wouldn't do me any good.

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~Xandi5anders Feb 16, 2008, 10:21:37 AM
Wait...Didn't you used to be Pheobus? Why are you Edward now? Besides his huge sleeves :giggle:

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I own Ron Weasley and Artie Abrams :heart:
Oh my Jareth!
"Listen close to everybody's heart and hear that breaking sound"
"Jellybean you can never comprehend the intellect of her mind"
"I can't on my own change [the world], but I can start with me."
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~upcloseandpersonal Feb 16, 2008, 11:07:02 AM
I think you nailed Beatrice. and I like Helena. I don't know enough about Viola to really give you my impression on her, but if I didn't think of the character, she has a wonderful face!

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un roman est un mirroir que l'on promene le long d'un chemin
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~HeartsmACkIngBOOMboX Feb 16, 2008, 11:11:27 AM
Because he's my male alter-ego :D

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=kinkei Feb 16, 2008, 11:12:40 AM
very good work

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~WhiteAngelDreams Feb 16, 2008, 1:29:08 PM
Oooh I like Viola! Her right eye is a smidge smaller than the left, I think. Also: HUGE eyebrows! I know she's supposed to be a guy, but did she stick dead mice up there?! :p

Helena's collarbone is a bit weird.

Beatrice's right eyebrow could do with being a little lower.

Other than that I see no faults. You're improving with every piece of work. :D Yay!

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~CaribbeanMouse Feb 16, 2008, 1:31:05 PM
Oh,I LOVE Beatrice's expression! It fits her perfectly. :D
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~HeartsmACkIngBOOMboX Feb 16, 2008, 1:59:25 PM
Thanks for the critique :D I'm definitely going to fix Viola's eye (I couldn't figure out what was wrong, so I'm glad that you pointed that out!), but I kind of like her eyebrows the way they are. I dunno, I think its because I don't want to make her too pretty. Attractive, yes, but not "HOLYCRAPTHATWOMANISHHHOOOOOTTTTTT!" and smaller eyebrows may take her to that level. Besides, it makes her stick out a bit from the other three. They're all starting to look the same, so I'm trying to give them little details that give them a bit of individuality.

Which aspect of Helena's collarbone needs fixing? I'd be happy to fix it!

Yeah, you're right about Beatrice's eyebrow. Thats going to be fixed :D

Thanks again for the critique :) I needed it!

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